Chapter 2 is up, and not bad...I went in and fixed some formatting and grammar/spelling things...
The only thing that I have an argument about is that Chapter 2 claims that the second murder victim was a girl. If you read Chapter 1, the body was shredded and the skull smashed, to the point where there was no way to identify the body, even if it was male or female....but maybe there was enough evidence to identify the body as female....I dunno....